REVIEW
Mayflies was such a poignant story. The introductory part really got me hooked and curious with the characters of the story and the trajectory of the plot; however, I find that the overall execution of the book did not work well with me.
I adore how the story tell readers of the characters, albeit quite lacking of colour. The choice of narration also gave a strong sense of inquisitiveness as the reader was thrown into the perspective of the more introverted one of the group. Furthermore, it was engaging how the author chose the characters’ youth as the opening sequence of the story.
What might have been a better approach, at least as I see it, was to use the more mature age of the characters as the initial perspective to the story. Then, following a non-linear path, the story will jump from past to present and intertwine each of the stories as it reveals answers yet keeps some secret to keep readers engaged. Moreover, I can see how it could have been provided a stronger connection with the reader if the story was written in first-person POV. The limitations of the story would have been more understandable and it will allow for a more genuine relationship with the characters.
There was also so much references within the story that I my head can’t seem to wrap around all of it and catch up. It feels as though I should have an encyclopedia at the ready just so I can relate to everything that the characters are talking about. If you like a good interaction with the book you’re reading, then this could be a perfect pick. Or, perhaps, you’re more versed than I will ever be in pop culture references.
In all honesty, I find that it was quite challenging to connect with the characters or the story. I tried to find something but I never really saw anything. There was a huge gap towards myself and the characters and this gave way to a strong detachment towards the story as well. It did have that sense that the author really placed his heart into the story. Perhaps it is his own or an entirely fictional tale, but it did give that vibe.
It is quite unfortunate that I did not connect with this story as much as people did. I saw the beauty of the tale and the wonderful reality between these people and their friend group; however, it felt as though this was written for the personal connection it had with the author and was not meant to really reach out to anybody else – a sort of diary, if I should compare. I’m glad for those who found kinship with the story and the characters. I still think that it’s something worth reading if you’re looking for a story about the genuine beauty of friendship.
